the day was ordinary
i dug my toes in the dirt
held on shyly to my mother’s skirts
surveyed strangers solemnly
left thumb hooked in my mouth
there was something shiny across the square
i wandered over, a curious five-year-old
my name was thurainay abdu salaam
my village was three hours south of baghdad
the sun was covered in shadow
i looked up, a plane filling my view
five flew over, giant winged arrowheads
eggs fell from the birds in the sky
the world exploded, i fell backward
smoke and fire blinded me
everyone was screaming, shouting, crying
my mother was across the square
was she? where was i? there was no sight
time ceased to exist for me
i stood, i walked in absence of direction
silent as in death
i couldn’t speak
i didn’t know what to say
i didn’t know what —
i didn’t know
i didn’t …
Wow, what an intense poem. I especially liked the end. I could really feel what the child would experience. Good job.
I can imagine the whole scene with the words giving out the feelings of the child. Nice!
Bless You! ~Namaste~