she sparkled like the sea shining in the sun
eyes the colour of sky pulled down with sooty fingers
hair of rain-dark bark of a forest of old oaks
perfect in that annoyingly innocent, artless way
massey was jealous
a green-eyed scamp
with a monstrous temper
and a chip of dynamite
on her shoulder
he and she walked shoulders touching, fingers entwined
whispering scintillating extemporaneous sonnets into each other’s ears
wrinkled couples nodded knowingly and gazed fondly at each other
such a lovely pair, dark and blue and bright and free
massey looked away
green eyes lowered
face blenched beneath freckles
she waded in deep
drifting out to sea
some say she escaped
I love the initial “earthy” descriptors.