stuck waist-deep in despond sinking slowly into slumber’s embrace can’t wake move breathe feel live how can i prove i’m good enough won’t you let me show you it could be brilliant amazing ingenious razor-witted but no you say too young too young go away what if i say please?
stuck
waist-deep
in
despond
sinking
slowly
into
slumber’s embrace
can’t
wake
move
breathe
feel
live
how can i
prove i’m
good enough
won’t you
let
me show
you
it could
be
brilliant
amazing
ingenious
razor-witted
but no
you say
too young
too
young
go away
what if
i say
please?
Lovely…..what if I say please? I loved the way it ended. I am feeling the child like innocence in ‘please’, so sweet!
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